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The Oath

broken sky and heartache
the flowers they won't grow
I just heard your heart brake
while my heart turned to snow

more death for your destruction
more seeds for your war to sow
the crippled are your deductions
your children from within them glow

so now I’m bound for the road
I’m leaving your pain behind
I have left you to your load
and I thank you for never being kind

I go now to kill my only true  friend
the scream rips a hole in your throat
I will be with you at the very end
but I can’t stand to watch you gloat

you boast to your men
for every thousand you keep
I only have ten
but its for you we weep

we will come from the sky
we will come from the land
we are only seen from corner of eye
but when we’re there you’ll understand

your mine to kill dear Sophia
you always have been
the answers never been clearer
for it’s only my future you’ve seen

you have seen on that day I will die
in a lovers embrace lying in your arms
but the tear only comes from your eye
I will not give in to your useless charms

the blade will cut and enter us both
so sharp so clean and oh so precise
then I will have for filled my oath
and in death we will both turn to ice

frozen statues for all to see
to cold to be melted by the hottest sun
together for ever you and me
I hope your happy with what we’ve become

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  • Roadkill Crisis
    April 26, 2007

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    i just read this for the second time, im still so incredibly moved by your words, the last line takes my breath away, my heart actually skipped a beat. wow babe this was such a beautiful expression of emotion, im deeply touched..
    love you xxx


  • Pikkie
    March 19, 2007

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    im left speachless... there is so much being said here... more emotion then i can ever feel. I love the last line, how true that becomes for many of us.


  • Diggs McGee
    March 15, 2007

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    This is interesting. I can't really tell what it's about, but I like the imagery and wording.

    good job


  • HugsForEveryone
    February 23, 2007
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    ...:)

    I like it.


  • Roadkill Crisis
    February 20, 2007
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    Ian.. wow, there is so much emotion in this. im moved. shit i actually have goosies.


  • Viva La Vie Boheme
    February 19, 2007
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    holy shit dude.
    I feel compelled to say more, but not much more comes out.
    Wow.

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