One excellent drop
Poised silently
In anticipation
Of that simple thirst
Being quenched
That fundermental thirst
That we all share
The thirst to find fulfillment
Like magic
Within the next drop
This perfect drop
Please tell me what you think
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Brava!
Dear Tara, This is lovely and the background is like snowflakes on the toungue. Your words are eloquent and yet hold simple truth. Brava! Jane
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beautiful
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SO BEAUTIFUL!
You have said in these lovely words the very thing we all hang onto throughout our lives, the hope of finding that which will bring to us true happiness and peace.
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This is simply a magical piece! Your writing is refreshing, drawing the reader inside that "one drop" quenching the essence of the soul... I feel myself closing my eyes, head raised to the heavens and feeling the anticipation... excellent penning dear poet, my pleasure to stop by your pages! All the best to you, Annie
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Now HERE is a place I could sit all day!
Like a Zen garden your poem is as the large stone in the sand... it is enjoyed for the beauty of form and the strong forces that created it. It is to be contemplated and enjoyed for the single purpose of bringing us closer to THAT place in which the author was standing when it was written.
To THAT place and THAT author I am eternally grateful.
May the flakes fall softly on my shoulders and linger in my hair... for I cannot move... I cannot leave this silent white garden yet... untouched... alone...
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Tara, this is just lovely. Like eternal kisses the droplet cover us, with a sense of love that is silent and simple as the snowflakes showing down!
Namaste!
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WOW! AMAZING!
Your beautiful words and this fantastic effect is simply gorgeous!
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You said it in a nutshell dear heart ... we drown in that thirst sometimes, but the anticipation of fulfillment keeps us struggling to get every drop
Beautiful and wise as always Ms. Tara
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