How do you feel
I feel ........
The words do not come
Thoughts are easy to express
Feelings only lead to stress
The words do not come
What is this sensation
Will it lead to devastation
Must find the words
My stomach churns
My heart burns
Must find the words
Fear sets in
The mind games begin
Where are the words
From nothing
Monsters we grow
Where are the words
Suppress this feeling
Regain control
Are there words
Lost confused
How did this all begin
Are there words
How do you feel
I feel .......
The words do not come
In a list
A contest entry
- Do You Deserve To Be In My Favorites? by Random Lily.
300 points, ended February 25, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please be honest, whilst stroking my ego is nice it does not help me grow as a writer. If you have any constructive criticism or positive suggestions on how to improve my work please let me know.
Comments
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The more you try, the worse it gets.A downward spiral.I find that is where poetry is invaluable.It enables us to get all those dried up words out of our system.A very good write, Ros
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The downward spiral into deep confusion is truly expressed here, in the pattern and rhythm of the poem. Very interesting write. Good job and good luck in the contest!
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