Dreams of you
across hazy october sky's clouds
wishing on moon
Author notes
This is my first Lune. I like it a lot! Fun fun!
A contest entry
- The Call of the Lune by Raelin.
525 points, ended February 18, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very nice write. Like the poem although very small it is cool.
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Such a wonderfully peaceful lune. Makes one feel so calm and relaxed. Makes me want to go out and lay under the stars and dream.
Best to you! -
Such a beautiful write. Many meanings can be seen in this write. Well done. Keep them coming and blessed be.
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Oh wow - I love these short, direct poems (I'm to dumb to use correct names - to me they are all death poems --- but not this one) - anyway - thank you.
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