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Shadowed

smurf and smurfette
along the bright path
a shadow of remembrance

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  • Papagallo
    March 25, 2008

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    well this is different from what you usually write. I liked the first line. The poem did make me think a bit. I also the idea of a smurf and smurfette.


  • Lavender Butterfly
    February 17, 2007

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    Made me giggle - the smurf and smurfette remark. Liked that! Totally different, yes truly unique. Thanks for sharing... x Butterfly.