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[ I had once heard that a Heart Never Forgets ]

I had once heard that a Heart Never Forgets
At that time I figured it foolish
Love would never find me

When least I expected I began to fall
Then I landed and now the pain is unbareable
So silly of me to have dropped

I never thought that you would trip me
Just talking of such things makes my heart ache
Its yearning for everything that you are

You've left of yourself within myself
Memories won't fade and the past will always be
Trying to forget you is like forgetting my own name

Sometimes i'll reminisce of the old times
Then reality hits me again as I see you
I can tell that you want nothing from me

She walks past me to you
The smile across both your faces makes me sick
If I could breathe I probably would have said something

Though I finally realized that its hard talking to you
Things will never be the same between us
Thats what hurts me the most

Sometimes when the opportunity shows itself
I'll make myself a wish
Even though I know that I shouldn't
I make a wish that you'll want me back
I Wish with all my heart that time would rewind

So foolish but it gives me a good feeling
Sometimes hopeful that I will be lucky enough to have you back
Back into my present and forever in my future

I dearly miss you all the time
Going on without you is a feeling of emptiness
One that i don't want to feel any longer

Here in the end I enclose my Heart
Forever marked as Taken and shattered

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I haven't written anything in almost a year maybe. Idk. But its not very good. just kinda writing some stuff. Try to get back into it maybe.

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  • mystic oceania
    February 24, 2007

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    You've improved greatly. Who or what this is about, I do not know. All I know, is that you have improved, and I am proud, no matter how little we talk. But I liked one line the best, one line, that called out.

    And that is line 10.

    "You've left yourself within myself"

    Poetic Beauty.
    Congratualtions.

    ~Mystic.