they dance
in the heat of the flames about them
naked and voluptous
they press their bodies
against the glass walls
revealing their screaming longing
in a tale of glass and fire
the passion rises
with he heat of crackling blaze
entwined and moaning
the voices escalate
in tempos of sudden release
as the song plays on
the embers fade
but the dance has barely begun
In a list
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
The first image that comes to mind is a car wash which utilizes fire to bake its clients clean as opposed to the more conventional methods we're all familiar with. Though I'm not sure how the lady's breasts against the windshield serve as a device for a more economic means of cleaning cars, I do know there's some good imagery here. It obviously leads the mind to many places. ;^) Thank you.
~Adam -
this is so different and new for me to read, it was rally refreshing and i loved it.
i love the imagery and atmosphere of it, and you rwally capture those actions perfectly
Adding your comment:
