Come crawling to thee
I with vagrant eyes
I am dust on the layers of time.
You my love
nothing more then a mortal meal
For a taste of your fine wine with tooth and lip I shall steal.
Come cower into darkness let me consume you with lifeless caress
With my love for you, I offer thee death.
A lifetime awaits
Sealed with the crest of blood
The flowers of night within thee shall bud.
Come follow me down the lane and behind the hedge
For I am starved for your purity and longing to be fed.
Within thee immortality like a storm rises overhead
Together we shall line the books
With the innocent we have misled.
Come now don’t fight against my will
Rest for a moment
Don’t fear me lay still.
The pain will last a moment just till I have my fill
And you shall be vacant slave to my will.
A contest entry
- Vampires and Blood! by okadadokie.
500 points, ended February 23, 2007, 21 entries
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Comments
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A poem shaped by intrnal dialogue one has. A sweet out pouring, enticing other to give much sought after solace. A very good poem, may lack brevity at certain places. keep it up. By the by are you a cricket lover.Your team is favourite to win ICC cup..Best wishes to your team...Venu
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thank you for the wonderful comments. I don't get many so I am grateful to the kind people who check my work out. I don't mind the cricket but I think the west indies will win ^_^ this time
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Very nice. Good rhyming, nice rhythm. An over all well written vamp poem. Great job. Good luck.
~Oka
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thankyou very much ^_^
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