Will you help me learn how to mend my broken heart?
Can't you hear my cry, at least understand why.....
I might leave to enter my tomb......
What your doing isn't correct,
A mother is suppose to nuture and protect.
Will you help me to learn how to mend my borken heart?
I have held the broken wing and wept.....
For my tears were like rocks thrown at the moon.
Oh momma how can you're heart be so crul?
After all it was you who wanted me.
Will you help me to learn how to mend my broken heart?
My life is a marry go-round lost in a prade
I feel like a painted clown lost in a charade
Afraid and betrayed bye the one I trusted must of all.
Will you help me to learn to mend my broken heart?
Oh momma how could you hurt me so?
After all it was you who wanted me.
I feel like am in a bubble no air to be found.....
My mind is in a haze can this be a mere phase.
Again and again this cycle repeats and mistreats.
will you help me to learn to mend my broken heart?
Oh momma how can you not care when your kicking me to the floor?
oh momma how can you not care when your pulling my hair?
oh momma how can you not care when your slapping me in the face?
oh momma how can you not care when your boyfriends try to take your place
oh momma how can you not care after all am only a child
your child momma your daughter.
After all it was you who wanted me.......
Will you help me to learn to mend my broken heart?
oh momma how can you not care when your punching me in the face
oh momma how can you not care when your breaking my heart with
each blow you pass.
oh momma how can you not care when my blood is dripping to the floor
oh mamma why do you hate me so after all it was you who wanted me.
oh momma can't you see I care, can't you see I love you
oh momma can't you see I have forgiven you......
Will you help me to learn to mend my broken heart.
A contest entry
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480 points, ended February 22, 2007, 58 entries
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this was very hard for me to wright about my mother.
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a few spell errors
cruel
merry go-round lost in a parade
broken
by the one
this is a deeply painful and personal write but very good, a few mistakes but things like this are typed from the heart and mistakes can be mended faster than hearts
good luck in the contest and in life my love
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thank you
thank you for the feed back it means a lot coming from you my friend thank you so much.
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A heart wrenching piece!
Very TOUCHING which has a powerful way of expressing YOUR feelings regarding how you feel... I could really almost feel the raw emotions that must've been present at the time it was composed...a tear shed from each eye! I am almost lost for words. I can imagine what u must have gone through.
I can understand the pain that you feel but as we go along in this crazy world, is that we should never stop trying, living, laughing, loving, or learning.
your heart will heal ,the heart always does,because your heart will continue to go on .We have all suffered in one way or another and actually feel that pain when it breaks and you do feel.... it will never mend but gradually it does it has to ..because without our hearts we cannot ever feel again,I wish I had a cure but there is nothing you can take for this ...It has to mend.. and in time that pain will gradually leave but it will never be completely gone...our hearts are so strong and yet they break ,but my friend in your mind there is hope and the will to go on..and so this is a part of life and its many hardships ...It is really hurts but all we can do is to move on because holding on is more painful ...You carry the cure in your own heart...
I wish you love, peace, light and pleasure....
GRACE
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you words were so strong the tears are flowing i really need to here your kind words sometimes i forget that there in time the hurt wont hurt as much i have such a crazy relationship with my mom sometimes i hate her for what she has done and other times i truly love her i have forgiven her but its been so hard and somethings i cant forget so i ask myself if i have truly forgiven her am trying to go fowerd in my life and leave the past in the past but some times all i can see and feel is the past and its not just with my mom its with my whole family. am married and have four kids i love my life that i have now but sometimes my past wont let me move on and its been hard for my loving husband because he dont understand why i still have anything to do with them and i say to him but tim i love them. thank you very much for your words my friend. and am sorry about rambulling on.
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This is the kind of poem that catches in your throat...you know? It is really beautifully written!
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greengable
thank you very much for your comments it was nice to get feed back .
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