I could be poor
slick with grease and grime
and still our love
would stand the test of time
Whether in the car
or on Siesta's Sand
The only thing I need to feel
is the warmth of your hand
In the hallways at school
or anywhere in this world
I don't quite fit anywhere
unless I am your girl
The only place
that I belong...
is being the melody
to your sweet love song
I am the strum
You are the melody
in a song entitled
"Sweet Serenity"
If you really want
what is best for me
then you'll understand
in your arms is where I should be...
Author notes
Option 3
A contest entry
- February New Member's Contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended March 14, 2007, 76 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Where did you say you were from again? There is a beach about 30 minutes away from me named siesta key. It's one of the top 10 beaches in the world. That line really stuck out for me. Anywayz, Great poem! One of my favorites!
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My mother and father had their honeymoon on siesta something... They have a photo of their wedding rings in the sand, and it says siesta in pretty script. So that was the inspiration fot that line. The picture is on the computer desk at home, and I happened to be looking right at it when I read this.
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww !! i fainted at the beauty of this poem !! this is truely just awesome !! i just love it to the core !!
If you really want
what is best for me
then you'll understand
in your arms is where I should be...
i could feel the emotions running in your heart at this moment !!
awesome !!
thank you so much for entering and best wishes in the contest !
your well wisher ,
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Welcome to Allpoetry
A sweet.. lovely write. So soft and lovey dovy
Thankyou for the entry and for following the rules. Good luck in the contest.
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Such a sweet write.. song of love. Thank you for sharing your words. Good luck to you in the contest.
welcome to AP
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this is a very lovely write , good luck in the contest with this lovely and love filled poem, i didnt notice any spelling errors either, good work
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Beautiful
Most beautifully and wonderfully written! Very much enjoyed this piece! I look forward to reading more of your poetry and wish you all the best in your writing endeavors! -
Beautiful poem
I like the flow in this piece and the message of love you are feeling. An even flow in each stanza helps to finalise this read
Let the ink flow and your fingers dance
Rosemary -
This was such a sweet sentiment. I think you did a good job with the rhyme and it had a nice flow. Thanks for the entry, and I wish you luck in the contest.
Despair
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