Her smile had faded
Anger had entered her heart
Could she really marry him
And continue to tear me apart
Could she really give up
Everything we have
Could she really say goodbye
Leaving me feeling sad
Did she really love me
Or was it all a lie
was this the end
Was this the goodbye
We had promised never
A guy would come in between
But he's in her heart
And there's no room left for me
The love for you is so strong
And it seems your's has weakened
My heart has lost a battle
And I have been defeated
You always promised foverever
And a guy would come in between us...
NEVER
My smile had faded
Anger had entered my heart
You're marrying the enemy
And tearing me apart
Please tell me what you think
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Betrayal is such a hard thing to get over, I still run from the cause of my pain, but I wish I didn't. It may never stop hurting, but you can move on. You can't wait for something that may never happen, especially because you may miss a better chance at happiness on your own. I understand promises and whatnot but your happiness shouldn't relie on another person. Only you. That's what I have learned and I don't know if it's bad advice but it helps me. I really like this. You do the rhyming so well, I don't really notice that it is. Just that it flows well, and you just have a good talent at showing your heart on paper (or in this case, the computer screen
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Muchlove,
Natasha
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aw sunni i think i understand this.I've lost Savanah basically over a guy, and it hurts but i mean i see it as if she is going to let a guy come in between us then our friendship wasn't strong enough to begin with.
You'll make it through this, you're a strong woman and i have faith in you.
I love you Sunni.
if i missed the point of this poem completly then just disregard my comment.
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