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Write Something New

You want me to write something new
Something of interest just for you
I'll think of a subject as I type along
Maybe it will be in the form of a song

I could write about a lovely butterfly
Or about the flowers as we drive by
Maybe a poem about a bird or two
They are lovely creatures that is true

I think I'll write about friendship so kind
About all of the years we have left behind
The good times, the bad there are quite a few
But the best of memories is our friendship is true

So I'll wish you the best of everything my dear
May you always have friends and loved ones near
May your cup overflow with good wishes too
May your life be a long one with a love so true

                  02-16-07

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This poem is for a contest. I just started typing and my poem is the finished product. Hope you like it.

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Comments


  • Random Lily
    February 17, 2007

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    This is so cute! This poem seems to illustrate that you appreciate the good things in life and want to share them with others. Insanely adorable write. Good job and good luck in the contest!


  • debilynn gold member
    February 16, 2007

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    this is adorable! the rhythm and rhyme are great. the imagery is wonderful! you did a superb job with this. keep writing. God bless you