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[ To be somebody's favorite ]

To be somebody's favorite
Oh please please
please pick me
I'll try to give you reasons
I can make an emotional plea
I'll write my heart out for you
if that is your wish
Lay it on a platter
Serve it on a dish
You have the right to delete me
Like so many have before
Seems my rhyme not reason
Is the thing people abhor

A contest entry

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  • poet43
    February 22, 2007

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    My fav . . .

    No matter the outcome, whatever it be
    You are a favorite, always to me
    That way you display your personality
    You wear it out there for everyone to see

    Thanks, tesse. I learn more about you each time I get the chance (which you allow) for me to glimps inside a very special person -- a very special poetesse.
    poet


  • Blueskywonder
    February 17, 2007
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    Brilliant


  • Whyitt U
    February 17, 2007
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    Brilliant!!


  • Random Lily
    February 16, 2007

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    Oh, God. This made me laugh so hard. If you don't make my favorites, you certainly made my day. I also actually like this poem a lot, it's cute and funny. Good job and good luck in the contest!