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Blessed tears from her cheek,
as time seems to pass by
the memories remain the same
making her fragile heart twist and bend
sufficating in her endless hell of many thoughts
never to open her eyes again
all the lies sent outspoken
left her lying there half-broken
then there was you
the one who made this all be
please wake her up now
and tell her its over
tell her its ok to die
so she can disappear
into the darkness
and not to be broken again.
Author notes
Emotionally drained from a past love
A contest entry
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Comments
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I like this one alot it has a lot of meaning. Thank you for entering my contest you may enter another poem if u wish
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I'm not sure if "granade" is a spelling error, or just a very clever touch. Please let me know...
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mistake
yea, you got me its a typo...i didnt realize it till now...thanks
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wow.
i really like this, its amazazing. thanks for entering my contest. its practically exactly what i was after.
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