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14 Notes




14 Red Roses <- Click



You're the one I'd live and die for
And race my heartbeats that I can't ignore
Sharing a friendship that lasts forever
Here's a toast for being together



Roses are red
Violets are blue
Day and Night
I think of you
The sexy boy
Who is so sweet
Who also controls
My own heart beats
Sugar is white
Chocolate is dark
Dont leave me
Or you'll break my heart
Hearts are red
Skies are blue
Dreams are nothing
but me and you
Oranges are orange
Apples are green  (at least my favourite ones are)
You're more pretty
Than what I've seen
Yash is sexy
This is true
this poem's an excuse
To say I Love You




Why I love you is a hard question.
I love you because you care for me like no one else does.
I love the way I feel in your arms, so safe from all the dangers.
I love your eyes, so beautiful to gaze into, and yet
never revealing everything to me.
I cant explain every way I love you
because that’s just impossible.
but I can say I love you because of who you are.



I'd tell you I don't care, that I don't need you,
I never think about you & you mean nothing to me.
but you told me you don't like liars.
and the last thing i want to be is something you don't like.



I can yell at you, be mad at you, say
stupid things & take them back, even
pretend I hate you.. but nobody in the
whole world cares about you more than me.


~*~


I've come to the conclusion,
that I'll love you till I die.
this love is no illusion,
no stupid crush, no lie.



There's always gonna be that one guy. The one
who you fight with constantly and drives you
completely insane. He knows just what to say
to piss you off beyond reason one minute and
then have you laughing hysterically the next.
He's one who knows you inside and out and he
knows about your imperfections, but he doesn't
care because he loves you anyway. You can
hang out with him doing nothing and still
have a good time. You cry to him after something
bad happens. He tells you everything will be
okay and you know it will be because he said
so
. He's the one who will always love you no
matter what happens and you know what, you'll
always love him too. Between the stupid
nicknames and the fights he doesn't always
win. He's the one who has everything,
because he's your everything.



I know its not realistic. Its not
even practical. It doesn't make
any sense. But for some reason
I just can't stop thinking about you.



Someone once asked me if I thought it would be possible
to love one person forever... And I thought for just a second
about how much I love you, and replied "Forever isn't nearly long enough...


A 3-word statement does not justify
the importance that you have in my
life. instead of saying I love you, I
want you to know that no statement
in the english language, or any other
language, could possibly captivate
the very essence of how much I truly
treasure your existance



Me? Fall in love with you?
What makes you think you got that lucky?
So what if every song reminds me of you?
If the thought of you brings a smile to my face for hours?
If I lay in bed, unable to sleep, because I'm thinking of you?
Call it crazy, or stupid.
you can even call it madness
but no, no.
I'm not in love with you.


You're amazing. You know that?
You see me breaking, falling apart, so full of hatred.
& yet you love me. you see me crying, weak, & yet remain un-phased.
I don't know how you can love me, but whatever it is, I hope it doesn't go away.



Under the stars at the edge of the sea,
There's no one around; no one but you & me.
We'd talk for hours as time drifts away;
I could stay here forever & hold you this way.



Inside your heart, seductive and sweet

Losing my mind, conscience and heartbeets
Over and over, it all happens again
Verse after verse, this love has no end
Even with patience I'm feeling so strange

You're causing me to be labeled deranged
Open your heart, and we'll make it through
Use all emotion, cuz you love me too

Author notes

These were the 14 notes that I gave to Yash for Valentine's

date: 14th February, 2007

{some made by me, others are quotes
But all of them have a touch of me
Like I changed them to fit }

I... I can only say

Il ne m'aime plus <|3

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Comments

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 19, 2008

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    I need to know in case this poem is the one, that it is okay to give to my lover. if you object please tell me ASAP


    • Never Fall in Love
      April 19, 2008
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      I don't mind - any of them. Although it may be weird for you to choose the first [if you do] as it's a acrostic of someone's name


  • Blooming Poet
    April 15, 2008
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    This is quite stunning, so many to choose from.

  • DarkRomantic113
    April 11, 2008
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    You're so romantic towards him...


  • Rockstar Bob
    February 24, 2007

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    ...eh?

    Maybe it's my simpleness that won't let me grasp this poem completely. It's very good, very creative. But it's a little ...complex for my tastes. Still, It kept me entertained.


  • Poet Brokenheart
    February 22, 2007

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    Maybe I should have read this one first, but after reading the other companion poems....girl, I'm telling ya, dat boy doesn't deserve you! heck, If I was him, I'd never stop falling in love with you!

    This might sound creepy, but I'm the kind of guy that can fall in love through a good poem, and if I a bit younger, or you a bit older, I'd be trying to find out where you live and fly half way around the world just to meet you!

    • Never Fall in Love
      February 22, 2007
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      You flatter me
      hmm .. this makes me wonder
      how old are you?

      But one advice, don't fall in love so easily
      it can hurt alot ... i have that experiance

      thank you again


  • trista gold member
    February 20, 2007

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    What a fantastic Valentine's Day idea. Each of these are lovely on their own, but when you put them all together like this it really gives a broad scope picture of the love you feel. Wonderful job. My favorite of all:

    "Someone once asked me if I thought it would be possible
    to love one person forever... And I thought for just a second
    about how much I love you, and replied "Forever isn't nearly long enough... "

    I really enjoyed this piece!
    All the best,
    ~J.


  • Death of the Author
    February 19, 2007
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    Perfect...

    ...not more I can say really, so I think I will leave it at that x take care x


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    February 16, 2007

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    i can't believe i read thsi whole piece,
    it is so beautiful and very loving,
    you have such a wonderful way with words
    14 notes that really is a lot of notes,
    i am sure you made him feel very special and that;s a great thing.

    manyblessings2u & yours always
    joyce

  • piccola silver member
    February 16, 2007
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    GREAT IDEA AND I LOVE THE PIC YOU USED


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 16, 2007

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    What lovely notes these make to give to someone on Valentine's Day or any day that is special to the two of you. Sentiments well expressed in these lines- easy to read and understand how you feel about this special person in your life.


  • Peteskid gold member
    February 16, 2007

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    such are the emotions

    the writer covers a big range of emotions in a clever way with these little blurbs and notes..keeps up the inerest...nicely done..very unique and creative

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