She walked with elegance
suducing her victims silent trance
she loved the bitter taste of pure blood
she drowned her mind in a crimson red flood
the taste she never resited until it controlled her mind
she tortured the tranced with love unkind
her fangs stuck deep in the neck of vengence
never minding the immortal consiquence
she wondered all through the night
drinking from the crimson river of life
her veins run cold
her eyes as yellow and deep as gold
she drinks away oh sweet immortality
she never knew the light as a reality
her dark veil she is hidden behind
never to show the identity of her kind
the bitter taste controls her mind
now she is ever tortured with a love so kind
A contest entry
- Vampires and Blood! by okadadokie.
500 points, ended February 23, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a good piece of dark poetry, let the blood of immortality run wild and free as time sweeps existence into the folds of the night.
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I like it. The poem was wonderful. And the title was well fitted for the poem. Great job. Good luck.
~Oka
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Nice Rendition
However, the take is that she is not happy with her life, but embraces the dark gifts that she has, an interesting twist, good job.
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