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Yeah? Go on then,

Why can’t I just be someone,
Do something
Create something
And make it come alive

There’s too much nothingness
Not enough drama
Too much nothingness
I’m gonna fade away.

And there’ll be nothing left
So when they ask
Where did she go?

I went away,
To be someone,
To do something
Create something,

I want to come alive.

That's not the point. It's just words.

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  • Kareena
    August 30, 2008
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    Haven't commented on any of your works in a long time. I've kind of let myself fade from this site.

    Anyway, I really really liked this. In it's simplicity it portrayed so much emotion. And I know exactly how you feel. I've felt like this before.

    You're still just as amazing as ever.
    How've you been doing, anyway?


  • narcissist
    June 14, 2007
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    Words written from truth rather than routine or relativity or need for approval. It's good... when you can still write for you and not for the people around you. Say what you want because you want it.

    No, it's not the point. and sometimes just words are just right.