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Queen Of The Night.....Demon Of The Crypt....ME

I am Queen Of The Night
Also known as Demon Of The Crypt
I chose to be eternal thousands of years ago
Unlike you all, i will never go
Being immortal is a vampire's dream
Your blood will  flow in an endless stream
The deathly night has always been my best friend
My protector,my cloak,my confidence,it never fails to help me defend
I haunt graveyards for unlucky souls
And dwell in the darkness of the crypts'soles
Though a hunter in the blackness i must be
My conscience is the only light left in me
Something deep inside me
Unlocks my heart and sets me free
Come in front of me and you won't be pretty
I'll tear away at your throat,drink your blood with no pity
To let you feel the sharp edge of my flashing teeth
Kill you,i will and haunt your crypt,to cause you nothing but grief





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i went on this site which gave me my vampire name..so i wrote a poem about....ME!!!

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  • kutipi234
    March 10, 2007

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    This is fantastic! I can feel the darkness and chill in this write. Again, wonderful descriptions you have here! Great job!


  • okadadokie
    February 20, 2007

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    Super poem Newy! This is (as to say) evil, and is filled with darkness. Great job. Good luck.
    ~Oka/Okie *howls to wolf sister*