b-b-baby. i only want
YOUR.kiss
your.♥
it doesn't have to be for//ever.
it just has to be for//to.night
please?
i know you want to pre.tend that this is
ohso.simple
and that you're just an
ohso.delicate
[[flower]]
but you can be so.so.so.much more.
just one night, dollface
one night is.all
Author notes
yeah. it's shit. but aren't they all?
A contest entry
- hey [bro/ken baby] give me your world. by makeout kid.
475 points, ended February 19, 2007, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh man...you have no idea how much I can relate to this a thousand times over. You captured it p e r f e c t l y, love. ♥♥
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Thathathankyarrrrr sweets.
Noise&&Kisses
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"i know you want to pre.tend that this is
ohso.simple
and that you're just an
ohso.delicate
[[flower]]"
--I like how you spaced all this and I'll never get tired of the delicate flower image. It really works as a description for the human soul.
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Glad you liked it, sweets.
Noise&&Kisses
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it doesn't have to be for//ever.
it just has to be for//to.night
i absolutely loved that.
i loved this piece...
a.maz.ing.
♥
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Gladyarr liked it, sweets. LoveLoveLoveyarr.
Noise&&Kisses
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