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The fragrance of the rose

 


speak to me of days gone by
and times that are yet to be
breathe deep and simply sigh
to beauty you are free

deep red rose so richly scented
inhale the giddy fragrance
your love is represented
filled with days of elegance

bobbed hair red lips sweet scent
know in you my love is content

Author notes

this is one of my favorites. It speaks of days gone by and love that is here and now as well as the beauty of the blood red rose.

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  • Cherokee
    March 13, 2007
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    A fragrant poem...


  • Samplette gold member
    February 17, 2007

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    Very nicely done. Sultry and simply beautiful. A pleasure to have read. You did such a great job on this. Thank you for entering. WOW


  • ShelleyA gold member
    February 17, 2007

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    A very good write and presentation. Good imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. Very nice expression of feeling. Good word choice. Very nice alliteration. Well done.


  • Touchof1der silver member
    February 16, 2007

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    Such lovely words flow down the page here. I could not help but smile as it brought my senses alive and alert. Very nicely done! Good luck in your contest.
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • lovelustre
    February 16, 2007

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    Ahhh...lovely words to swoon to, a beautiful woman lost in thought and sensuality to the scent of a rose...beautiful poetry you have here.

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