Indestructible
not even my heart can break me.
Undesiring of the ones
who feel the same of me.
Am I undesirable?
Frightening,
how strong I am inside.
Only one can shoot me down.
but can he really?
My heart may be broken,
my mind of less emotion.
Yet.
My stubborn pride is still there
that shallow snob within me,
the bitch in heat waiting to strike.
That is a part of me
a part every girl holds.
Yes, he cannot completely kill me.
But if he does leave,
he'll kill the only me I like.
Author notes
Wrote this during Anatomy..yuppers.
Give me your input...every thought..every critique.
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A good comtemplation here. Everyone always has that little fire in them that comes out when needed. Well some people always seem to have that fire.
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This is AMAZING.. i just love it. its so true. i can see me in it as if i am looking in a mirror. its...stunning. i love it. -eleno
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The further we run from who we are, the less human we feel. A bitch is a female dog. Nice kick at the last...
We lay our head upon the block
We say our last prayer
and wait for the executioners ax to fall
in the brief moment before the blade hews
we see in the reflection
in the eyes of the people
watching our demise
the executioner
is ourselves
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wow, you caught me off guard with this one!!! great job in penning!!!
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*hugs tight and doesn't let go* you are not undesirable... i'll IM you with exACTly what i want to say... great write, though.
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Excellent
Very emotional. This is a great poem and really liked this one. Great Work
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