Is it for the blood or the passion
for the need or the lust that's within
this love for the one who is needing my blood
the one who bites into my skin
is it for the rage or compassion
to keep you alive or to kill
is it for the hope that the two of us last
or is it just for the need you must fill
is it for my blood or the passion
love for a vampire
loving my blood
must it remain just a dream in my head
a serious sign that i could end up dead
here i am, still, i wait for him to bleed
to prove all the love he has taken from me
my vampire, lusting for blood in my veins
only true love if the love isn't safe
how i lust for a mere fantasy, yet again
i know i could not have anyone like him
how i would risk my life
but to risk mine, he'd anger
a love that i want for the passion
-- but danger
it lurks in our lips when we kiss
it lurks in the blood that's flowing through my wrists
it's wanted by eyes filled with dreams
-- filled with need
a love that i want
-- for which i cannot bleed...
Author notes
A Love Vampire Poem
A contest entry
- Vampires and Blood! by okadadokie.
500 points, ended February 23, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Excelent i really liked this piece alot! great job good luck
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Very Nice Rendition
I liked the flow and the storytelling. Most people think that vampires and their blood love is one and the same when they are with the opposite sex. However, if they are with the right person for them, it makes it that much more irresistable
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Very well written "vampire love" poem. Good rhyming too. Each word flowed right into the other. Keep writing. Good luck.
~Oka
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