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Everything I Wanted

We went out for so long,
But we moved so slow.
When the school year came,
To a very sad end I had to go my seperate way.
You were the perfect one for me,
But how can you kiss [her]
When you haven't kissed me?
So you left me heartbroken,
And depressed.
What do you expect me to do?
Reminise over what we could've been?
Another year?
I let a year go by doing that.
I'm moving on Baby.
Thanks for teaching me.
You taught me,
Everything I wanted,
Was what I didn't need.
You were everything I wanted...

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Title inspired by Avril Lavegne. (don't know if I spelled the last name correct)

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  • Raida Boy94
    March 5, 2007
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    very sad, but I liked it. I hope you are doing better. Yeah John Cena rocks.


  • Nightscar
    February 20, 2007

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    yea line 4 does seem off but hey keep writing and your doing so much better practice makes you better


  • Mr Lunar Hyde
    February 17, 2007

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    This is very good. I love that song by her. Line 4 sounds awkward. Maybe you could start a new line after end. Overalll a good piece.