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[ The morning Sun shines softly ]

The morning Sun shines softly
on the misty waters of my soul
I drink in Your love silently
that Your beauty I may know

I sink into the Quietness
of Your Love and Your Peace
I want to stay here forever
to be with You without cease

Your life and purity bring
comfort and peace to my soul
Your holiness and purity
are the only good I know

Stay with me, and never leave
o, my Precious Lord Divine!
Your healing waters flow through me
and heal and renew my mind!

Whatever the world has done to me,
You make all the pain go away!
Jesus, I give You my self, my life,
for all eternity and a day!

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  • Moonlit-Reveries
    February 23, 2007

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    Very serene poem of deep spiritual love. It flows so gently too. Nice write.

    Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck.


  • joshuap
    February 18, 2007

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    I loved this write!!!!!It's so heartfelt and profound.It's so simple but it flows with love for the Lord.You've done a magnificient job.

    God Bless You
    Josh


  • April Renee
    February 17, 2007

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    on the misty waters of my soul
    I drink in Your love silently

    very good. nice job with writing it. good luck in the contest. enjoyed the read.

    blu


  • Shining for You
    February 16, 2007
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    welldone

    This is a lovely way to spend your quiet times with the
    lord.


  • x CheepPurfume
    February 16, 2007

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    Aaaaw. This was absolutly a wonderful piece! Who can't love the sun? haha but anywho, your words really flowed well. Great job! Keep up the amazing work!

    Tori

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