another lonely valentine,
is what i got that day,
no one to hold me,
or kiss my pain away.
it's the same as every year,
having no one by my side,
i always shed these tears,
in them, only, can i confide.
oh, how i wish i had a love,
someone to hold and kiss,
someone sent from above,
that i shall never miss.
but i am all by myself,
with no one here to hold,
so i put my love on the shelf,
an action oh so bold.
and now i am feeling numb,
but i feel it with a smile,
everything is dumb,
but hear heaven all the while.
Author notes
yeah, i had a few minutes so i thought i would write a new poem for this contest...though i know i won't win anything.
A contest entry
- Anti Valentine by Memoirs of a Girl.
385 points, ended February 20, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very good
This was... intense. Sad, yet true for so many. I really liked reading it though at the same time it was kinda hard. Just more reminders of the single and lonely life. Haha... Oh yeah, I sent you an e-mail… didn’t know if you checked often so...
Well, good job on this piece.
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This is really good. It is so so true. I always feel like this on Valentine's Day. All the happy couples all around you and no one for you. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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yay!
thanx for the luck...though i never win anything...i just enjoy judgments
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