Tracing fingertips against a sunken collar bone,
you //tore\\ me up i.n.s.i.d.e.
Darling, there's nothing like an acid bath to make you feel warm at night,
the ole' shock treatment will put shivers down your spine.
You know I love it when you touch me like that,
you know I love it when you bruise my shoulders in pretty colors.
[You know I] need you (so much) closer;;
[[like fire in my lungs]]
Baby, with those fucked up lullabies,
we watched the kaleidescope sky twist and turn,
making shapes of flowers and reality driven dreams,
trauma, doll face, t r a v e s t y,
you broke my porcelin heart and I'm still standing around waiting for the super glue.
Can you tear up my pretty cocaine veins,
shoot air into my throat, with those lo-lo-lovely syringes?
Thoughts running through my mind,
[Iloveyou;; how cliche]
I ran through the muddy puddles,
crashing into cars and dreams on the sidewalks of your soul,
ripping slits into my thighs [you never told me it wasn't right]
well maybe if you'd whispered something [oh anything baby;;anything]
I wouldn't be kneeling in front of the cool white bowl,
praying for perfection on an empty stomach.
Choking on my insides in the corner of the room,
I see you laughing to yourself across the corridor.
"Well baby, fuck me sideways."
I'd like to shove a knife through your heart,
just so you'd know EXACTLY what it feels like to battle for the air to breathe everyday.
Darling, stop telling me you 'understand',
because I know;;(you'll never understand)
So tear up bloodied lace and drape it over your carved out eyes,
ignore the danger, ignore the signs,
just hide behind your mask and pray for something better.
[Idolize me, break me, destroy me]
Author notes
merrmerr.
iloveyou♥
A contest entry
- hey [bro/ken baby] give me your world. by makeout kid.
475 points, ended February 19, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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well-written
You really deserved Gold.
Im fallign asleep here, Cus..
Well I woke up too early, so my comments
are getting worse with every poem.
lol.
>.<
I need to keep myself updated on your work.
Keep it up<3
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A M A Z I N G ! ! !
This one makes me randy lol
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Can you tear up my pretty cocaine veins,
shoot air into my throat, with those lo-lo-lovely syringes?
Thoughts running through my mind,
[Iloveyou;; how cliche]
that is beautiful love.
pure brillance.
<3 Lolly
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looove it.my favorite part is def this::
"you broke my porcelin heart and I'm still standing around waiting for the super glue."
--brilliant! -
...wow.
I think you made me [into] a fan.
I'll definitely make a note to (my)self
to) read more of your poetry.|
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Thank you love♥
I'm glad you like them [=
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ah.maz.ing.
&& i ♥ it.
[like i love you. except i love you more.]
hehe.
&hearts.
be mine?? -
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Most deffinitly, I will be yours.♥
I lovers youuu [=
More than music
and that's alot.
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