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Coffee Clutter - Bronze

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Single by design or divorce, we gather to dine on our destinies:
Red-head, blond, brunette belligerence biting on crisp chef salads.
A mish-mash of ideas fork-lifted to tightly curled tongues.  Bitter oils race
into their own rancidness.  Turban, bandana,
and a pert scarf all knotting on swelling bravado at being courageous
enough to have shaved our legs, colored our faces, crayoned over
shattered places of our best lost losses.

She says: 
His new girlie girl can’t hold a candle’s watt
to my heated hatred

She says: 
Yeah, she’ll melt his “Glue-too”  tie-dye hair implants
and black will streak like badly written goodbyes
on rained-on love notes

She says:
How different can she be
except their music won’t match?

We wrestle with wilted lettuce beneath our bridges,
snap celery with sharp canines, wave carrot sticks like wands
while we smile like multi-colored cats over cold coffee,
wet tissues fall like dropped blossoms. 

She says:
I had his best, she can have his rest.

She says:
He’ll grow older, she stay younger.

I say:
Depends!

We hover, hysterically over a halting thought,
sip soothing latte with tight lips where orange crawls
like a map route, to our newly crafted noses.


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  • Aowena
    February 17, 2007
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    Love it! Gorgeous.


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    February 16, 2007

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    Oh yeah..The coffee pours and the mouths start going.This was so on target on how we women can dish it out. An enjoyable piece my sister...Cant wait for our own Coffee Clutter.

  • Rowan gold member
    February 16, 2007

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    Wonderful work; with just the right amount of dish, and dirt. Loved this, felt like I was there munching on salad, and more deliciously..gossip. Excellent!