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My Best Poem

This is my best poem
Not because I have to write
Or I have the time
But it just feels right.

I know not many a rhyme
Not that I can use some repetition
It might probably get me a dime
But my problem could be my diction.

I will try get a background
Though I know not what to symbolize
And just so I may get some ground
My i's I will capitalize.

I doubt I will have a form
Or even have some sense
But even without a metaphor
My poem is the best!

Please tell me what you think

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  • beryl
    December 20, 2007
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    Very clever, but are you being smart, or a smart a..! Only jokes.


  • darkmermaid
    September 21, 2007
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    Interesting one. Girl you really are a true poet!!!Creative


  • Twinstar gold member
    May 24, 2007

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    This is really great! Because you know what the poems that I think are the best are not the ones that are of perfect form or any of that stuff, but is what just falls into place and flows with what we are feeling. I loved this! Great job!
    Peace
    Debbera


  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 9, 2007

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    This was great its almost as though you feel lost for a moment but finds no matter what your still the best


  • A u r i e l l e
    March 30, 2007

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    this poem was ok

    maybe a suggestion of alliterations of some uniqgue metaphors or an imagery for that interest me but everyone have their own. Yet the message was good

    you express wel

  • paullallady silver member
    March 5, 2007

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    This is very good, and it speaks of what it is like for almost anyone who writes poetry. To me, it does not matter how it comes out. Poetry is emotion, feelings and thoughts. For me, believe it or not, I actually think in rhymes so mine come out rhyming, when I try not to rhyme I really have to work at it. so keep writing in whatever "form" you wish or desire, but always paint with feeling and emotions, just like you do.

  • EPoD
    February 22, 2007

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    Indeed. If you think it's your best poem then by all means it must be and you definitly get brownie points for capitalising those i's.

  • Neef Kykmytros
    February 22, 2007
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    hahahaha. a few typos aside, this provided me with some sunshine on a cloudy day.


  • Jacki D
    February 19, 2007

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    aok

    I get where you are coming from. An old friend of my told me that poetry is an indiviual art. What is seen great by some is sometimes seen dirt by others. And then again I think a little jealousy is in the mix. I write for myself and could give a hoot less what others think. Some of my poetry sicks big time but others are good but I'm not out to impress anybody. So kept writing whats in your heart. Jacki


  • x CheepPurfume
    February 18, 2007

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    haha. very clever. Like...I clicked into this..and thought it was just going to be an old poem..you renamed or something..but it was new and beautiful. It's very wonderful, an poet such as yourself can say something like this. Gives me as a writer, to want to write something like this. Amazing job. Keep up the great work!

    Tori
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