Two AM
I hate you again.
Feel free to leave...
...oh wait you did
and I am going numb
losing trust and
no more relationships
for the sake of me.
This is what happens
to those perfect men
Their hearts get stomped
it ruins them.
And here I go-
a girl once so full of hope
now I look at people
and hold in vomit.
with the hate that rubs off
un kind words
stabbed when your back is turned.
I need some honest words
some arms to hold me
some sweet lips
and a true love please?
can I just have a REAL man?
look me in the eye
tell me you're him
psh..you're lying like the rest.
Hopeless as the next girl
looks like we're in it for the pun
as it hurts less with every punch
expected from one
then the other..
it could hurt less
I'm holding on to a limb
(I won't hold my breath)
maybe one day..
My knight will come along.
Author notes
sorry this poem really isn't very good...maybe I'll enter a different one. thanks for reading though!
A contest entry
- Anti Valentine by Memoirs of a Girl.
385 points, ended February 20, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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honesty's good... so is that poem, I always said you were a great writer, i just never imagined that would be about me.
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I really like it. It's not like a standard poem, but I think with this poem, that's a good thing. I know exactly how this feels. It hurts to see others together because you're not one of those couples anymore. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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