Submerging myself in the tub
with surrounding candles aflame
You read your words
sensual and erotic
Speaking each word with a tongue
filled with passions fire
With eyes closed
I feel every word
touching my body
arousing my senses
Your reading slows down
Opening my eyes
to see yours gazing at me
with pure and uninhibited lust
A look that intoxicates me
enticing me to surrender
you lean in to kiss me
as your hands seek
what you desire
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Wonderful
This is wonderfully erotic.
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wow this is very erotic and very good i like the way you write one of the best erotic write ive read in a long tim
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MMMMMMMM!
Now this drips woderfully well with the steamy sensations of our earthly desires manifested from the combined efforts of the great three, Mind, Body, and Soul.
Perhaps you should alter your AP name to "Sensually soulful woman". Seriously, MMMMMMMM! It is so hard to understand todays problems of so much drug abuse when the greatest highs in life lie in the profound pleasures that only lovers truly know. You express such a high, deftly well with this delightful read. I do believe I shall bookmark it. Oh yes and clearly this one oh s deserves this
as well as full applause. You make me want to ravish my love even greater than before. Heaven help her. Poor girl! 
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hmmmm..steamy...I think you are in my head, knowing my fantasies this was raw sensuality..dripping...Now I know why your hands, fingers are wrinkly...you been in that darn tub , shower, too long...lol...awesome write...ONCE AGAIN! You amaze me...~~Your kindred spirit~~~
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holy .......gsp...woman! Dang you are good at this...someone going to be downright soppy once yer done wiff em!
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