I’ve wanted to love you
for days
and weeks
each time you smile
nose wrinkling
eyes sparkling
I’ve wanted to whisper
soft words into your ear
little kisses from my heart
to yours
I feel your hearts heat
healing my scars
sealing my wounds
protecting my weaknesses
I’ve wanted to hold you these past days
and long nights
and never let go
so much to think of
and cherish
things to remember
for colder times
I’ve been wanting and wanting
to tell you
I Love You.
Author notes
For someone I think I might love.
Please tell me what you think
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how sweet.
I envy you! For the life of me I cannot write a love poem that doesn't sound hallmark, cliche, and sappy enough to glue your mouth shut. You lucky- duck. This poem is really sweet without sounding over-used or cliche. Great job!
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you know Kar, I think you might love him too. I hope you both realize how much you need each other...he's great and you are to. babe this poem makes my heart melt. It's perfect for him and it is 100% straight from your heart. I love you. This is a beautiful poem.
Kendra
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Oh. This is such a nice poem.
It is very gentle and heartfelt. Lestways, it seemed that way to me. It sounded so honest and open like you had just opened your chest right up and spoke directly about how you felt and I thought that was great. You did a good job of expressing yourself here.
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damn gal this is a very moving piece,it touches a nerve in my heart making me tremble...is it about your kid?
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I find it interesting how life can be so vivid in youth; things are often black or white, hot or cold, agony or ecstasy and rarely anything in between. Perhaps it is that life is viewed through eyes that are new and haven't become clouded with living yet? I don't know. Enjoy this time while you can, kar. Life is a long haul and soon you'll likely find the greys, the warms, the status quo that allows you to keep going.
Nice poem. I like the heartfelt approach you take. Good too see you writing again. I've missed you...
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The voice here is so very soft and pure, and the longing and the wanting almost tangible. Lovely gentle write straight from one heart to another!
~ Nicolette
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this is so nice, friend, this is so nice
your poem is so nice and straight forward and full of pure, woman's longing. ,,,Danni / this is just beautiful ... it is just beautiful.
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