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Waiting for the Phone Call while Eating Chocolate

Ring already RING!,
I'm waiting for your voice,
im so hyper i would jump up and sing,
as if i had much of a choice.

Call me like you said you would,
for a reason that fills me with glee,
i'd called and texted more than i should,
just having you call back would make me happy.

I'm eating chocolate,
counting the down the hour,
you invited me, and you told me you'd call tonight,
dont turn my mood sour.

I'm half way through,
my sweet valentine treat,
i'll be up all night its true,
and besides, your too sweet.

I'm three fourths way done,
its been one hour since i tried to call,
waiting for your call is not fun,
i just hate waiting at all.

I'm done with the whole box,
all heart shaped and wrapper filled,
chocolate stops my brain blocks,
my thoughts are spilled.

Still waiting for you to call me,
As you'd told me to tonight,
So if your true, we'll see,
your still cute, despite,
this.

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kylie nos the story, well she can tell u cait. lol

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  • eyes of the sea.
    February 17, 2007
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    yay..

    he finally called, he couldnt call earlier cuz of musical,lol.


  • the Eye of Truth
    February 15, 2007

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    Kenzie!!!! I love the title, as i do most of you, very spur of the moment, and inspiration of the piece, lol....anyways, i was hoping it would give it away, but it didn't....hmmm....i won't push it, even if i do wanna know, lol, i hope he does call you, and i hope you don't get sick from all the chocolate, but this whole experience has made you write a wonderful piece, if that makes you feel any better....and i'm always here to talk, remember that, good luck with the guy you lurv, lol, great write, btw.

    ¤BLONDIE¤


  • musical-psycho
    February 15, 2007
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    Outstanding, that's all I can say...

    - Cait -