I rise above the autumn
brilliant in its colors
There is beauty in my sight
I stand steadfast amoung the leaves
A woman full of power
shaded with imperfections
There is a child still inside me
that frolics in my heart
Viewing nature with eyes
of innocent indulgence
Breathing in the scent of life
as we breathe in unison
Sharing the beats of our hearts
Singing our songs of forever
Continually embarking
on journeys of purpose
In a list
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was a wonderful piece. I got the sense of freshness; spontaneity even. I enjoyed the rich imagery and excellent form and background which all come together to cause a remarkable impression on my mind. These were great lines, "There is a child still inside me
that frolics in my heart
Viewing nature with eyes
of innocent indulgence". Well done.
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A cornucopia of delight this gift of autumn delight, thanks yu for sharing such a wonderful piece of work here
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Oh, I knew this one was for you..... the child and the woman know autumn's harvest well...and what comes next? Time to sink into a beautiful new adventure.
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Sereness is filled with subtle emotions of what the woman was born to become.
Keep penning
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