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Pegasus in Industry- In 40 Lines

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In my idle mythological travels as I gaze upon the earth to see its many changing faces as myth and legend time erases, my heart is touched as I see my long-lost name in industry…



Let us don our industry-spectrum-tuned equestrian glasses to see what products honor me and my distant mythological glories…



The wonder! An efficient robotic system for cleaning the cages of valuable DNA-manipulated and transgenic rodents, the "Pegasus Cage Cleaning Robot"!
So, my name of Pegasus, yet in flight and spirit, is befit for modern-day laboratory animal facilities, lending itself to a technological marvel that is exquisitely designed to reduce occupational health problems. What a great mechanism. Beat that, Zeus!


As I fly, gazing down… gazing down…


What is that I spy at the strip-mall down yon upon the winding trail of Route 40? Why, it’s a... let me read the sign...

"-Pegasus Bookstore and Stationery-"




I have been immortalized with a Book and Stationery store! A fine addition to my growing legend… Computer hardware, software, and fine stationery implements to record my majestic deeds. Stop by and enjoy a cup of Java!
Ah, the gods never had it so good on Mount Olympus…



What is this? Is it my Mother Medusa reincarnate?




No, it's just the Pegasus payphone. It does bear a minimal resemblance to me… but it lacks my graceful lines and features. Such a repulsive creature! I shall drop mementoes upon it hideous carcass…


Now you may be wondering what sneakers these are that I am wearing…




Nike Pegasus, naturally.

   I fly with grace, the human race ever busy under me, affixing stickily there my name, already wide with legend and fame, on the face of industry…
   As I soar through eons wide, and just when I was feeling low- gone the myth-days, long ago- I find, to my long-lasting joys, that I (and myth) are honored with our names on useful tools and toys:

a Pegasus biycle built for two…



finely-crafted Pegasus jeweled wristwatches…



a speedy Pegasus speedboat…



a Pegasus down-insulated jacket with zipper pockets…



a modern Pegasus mobile note taker made by the evil giant, Microsoft

(remind me to slay that blight on technical progress and innovation)…



a Pegasus wireless router with a one -year limited manufacturer's warranty…



even overstocked books, all using my celebrated name to sell, sell, sell…




   The land was barren, lone I came, born of mythical legend and fame; first was I, and now I'm 'us'- the world's replete with Pegasus…

Pegasus Barbie books of the cutest button-nosed order…



Pegasus Diaper Stickers to inspire future heros…



and my personal favorite, a petite Pegasus rocking horse…




   Ah, father Poseidon, mother Medusa, your son is well, his fame is wide, ever among the shining stars,
   his golden bridle gleams on high at the ecliptic above the trees in the wintery northern skies…
   art and science have harnessed here the thundering wing-ed horse of Jove,
   as neither Athena’s gilded bridle nor Bellerophone's great hands could hold-
   the lightening bolts I've carried long, once reserved for mighty Zeus,
now light the human towns' facades in a whole new way that light is used- ne'er envisioned by the gods…







Even a site of poetry! How glad can this god-steed be! as I…


     “Saw the moon rise o’er the landscape,
     Saw the tranquil, patient stars;”


Yes… but what is this, that this tale tells? I was chained; being sold as a stray in a 19th century American workingman's town? Ah, well, a bit of the wine-o'-the-gods, perhaps, had led me to such an ignoble predicament…
Ah! As I read, I see I did escape, and flew my course back to the heavens. Such a fitting fabled ending! So here, I, Pegasus, of legend and myth, shall share the end of that tale with you, as so too does our journey together here end. Fare thee well…

(We enter the poem near its end, after I have escaped my unfortunate bonds...)


     “But they found upon their greensward, where my struggling hooves had trod, pure and bright, a fountain flowing, from the hoof-marks in the sod.
     From that hour, the fount unfailing gladdens the whole region round, strengthing all who drink its waters, while it soothes them with its sound.”


     Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, “Pegasus In Pound”

Author notes

Any further editing will be done on the original (over 40-line) version.

Contest Notes:

Industry Information:
http://www.iwtsrl.it
www.rocomx.net
www.gwg.com/pegasus/index.html
www.pegasusproducts.com/index2.html
www.m2000sport.com

Mythological Information:
http://www.pantheon.org/articles/p/pegasus.html


Even a Poetry Site:
http://www.lair2000.net/Pegasus_Poetry/Pegasus_Poetry.html

Main Photo- from wallpaper site, artist unknown.

How Pegasus relates to me- Pegasus was a noble steed, I am noble indeed; he honor's industry rather than knocks it down as is the wont today; same with I; he is a bit low after the high's of his myth-making days; I'm a bit low after my first two unrepeatable years on AP; to dull life's woes he has acquired the trait of humor, as have I...

end of Contest Notes

A Note on Longfellow's piece "Pegasus in Pound"- I did not know of his piece until the end and after I had my title. The uncanniness of our similar titles and settings may be attributed to a greater American mindset that has spanned the years.

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  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    February 17, 2007

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    Wow! This is by far the most creative piece I have seen entered in this round. Great job with this.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**

  • JM Kenyon silver member
    February 17, 2007
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    I love the unique approach that oyu took with this write Shows how much the myths of old still pertain to everyday life and functionality of individuals. Great work! s and best wishes always... ~Genie~


  • Ryno
    February 17, 2007
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    LOL

    This is the funniest entry yet Very creative and unique, I got to tell you - I wouldn't have the guts to write this differently in the contests - but heck, maybe writing this differently will pay off. Interesting write.
    ~Ryan~


  • leander Moderators member
    February 17, 2007

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    LMAO
    Where on earth did you find all these things It's absolutely wonderful and creative I had to pause a few seconds because I couldn't read any further when I came to the Pegasus Barbie book, diapers and rocking horse

    You, mister, have a lot of guts for writing this to be honest. Especially because you stepped out of the box of the 'true mythological creature'
    great!


  • deadcolor dreams
    February 17, 2007
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    Made me laugh.


  • Celticmoon
    February 16, 2007

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    OK first of all....

    My comments on and through this challenge will be honest and straight forward but based solely on MY personal opinion and/or preference. What I say does not in anyway, cast your words, talent or write to be less than. They are suggestive comments from MY point of view.


    With that being said, on to your entry.....



    Well my dear brother I have to admit this certainly is one hell of creative piece you have penned but then I would expect no less from you.

    First I thank you for editing down the line count to meet the limit as well as include the links of reference as per requirement. Though the line width was a tad distraction when reading

    However, in all the wacky industrial assembly line of your poetic thoughts and verse I am having difficulty in seeing the relation of the Pegasus to you yourself; unless of course you are doing so in the manner of showing how the Pegasus has grown to become a symbol of commercialization for Americans in the present day and thus you yourself have become commercialized in the sense that you have to become a symbol of America in persent day......though not so sure how you yourself would be commercialized to begin with.

    Over all your creativity was certainly on the ball as always with this piece. I am still laughing here.LOL

    Thanks for the time and effort you have put forth in this challenge.


    • wbiro gold member
      February 17, 2007
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      thanks, sis, and I shall endeavor to relate Pegasus with my traits in my author's comments, though they may not be as profound as your interpretation!

  • Celticmoon
    February 16, 2007

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    75

    I can see how the Pegasus can relate to manufacturing and industry, as a sign of progress, but how does it relate to you as an individual? The formate was a bit hard to read since it was all over the place. I really would have like to have read how the Pegasus traits and your traits matched...how much Pegasus is in you. Thank you

    • wbiro gold member
      February 17, 2007
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      thank you for your suggestion, those who know me would know how Pegasus relates to me through this piece, but I shall endeavor to make it explicit in my author's comments...


  • poetryality silver member
    February 16, 2007

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    You are absolutely from another planet! Now who else would have taken this route on this type of assignment but you. Dearest son, it is not that serious. You are incredibly insane. Here, I think you may have forgotten to take your today. Are you feeling light-head and a but Pegasus? This is unbelievable and quite the different perspective all together. I love what you've done. Know that my sides are split from laughter, I will take a much needed break and come back to this later. I wish you the best in this round dear Honoray Son. You are a fascinating creature, to say the least!

    Love Always ♥

    Renee (MOM)

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