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to put it nicely [i hope you choke]

I
...

want him.
to get drunk [so

drunk off of me,]


That he wouldn't have
the lies

to speak....




[[[even if I'd let him.]]]

Author notes

option 1: d)i want a lover i dont have to love, i want a boy whos so drunk he doesnt talk
& used the title.


wow. feel free to DQ my girl. hahaha, wow. that's all I can say.

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  • noir eyes
    February 20, 2007
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    short && sweet
    great job, baby, im impressed =]
    ♥


  • Zombie-x
    February 18, 2007

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    so short yet so incredibly wonderful!
    your like a great writer i swear probably one of the best ive seen on here!
    ♥


  • Hell In Harmony
    February 17, 2007
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    short and simply beautiful<3


  • bird-mad girl
    February 17, 2007

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    don't we all want a boy like that.
    even a girl.
    anything.

    this was short and simple but sooooooooo enchanting.
    I can't describe the feeling I got when reading this.
    it was just soo gah. yeah. that's right. gah.

    you've left me braindead.
    and I envy for it.
    dazzling.

    loverz you like a fat kid loves cake [haha oooo 50 cent how you tickle my kidney]

    • CarCrashHumor
      February 17, 2007
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      awwwwww
      you're the best.

      [forget 50 cent, I'll be your fat kid's cake anyday AND tickly your kidney at the same time. ]


  • love tank x
    February 16, 2007

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    Ahhh I love that song!
    Bright Eyes=sexx.
    Great job hunnie;; I love how a lot of your poems are so simple yet *perfectly* worded and beautiful.
    ♥

    • CarCrashHumor
      February 16, 2007
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      yeah, conor oberst is a sex magnet.

      kinda like you.


      damn straight we're marrying. gawwwd, it's not even a question heheh ♥


  • makeout kid
    February 16, 2007

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    i lovelovelove this.
    wow.

    gawd girl,
    you have this way about you.

    && i absolutely love you.


  • sweetpearl
    February 16, 2007

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    Short and simple, I like this:

    "That he wouldn't have
    the lies

    to speak"

    --I see a band of friends with torches "burn the liars, burn the liars" oh no.


  • No Room To Breathe
    February 15, 2007

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    You're writes have been rather short lately.
    But I still love them.[&you]
    "get drunk [so

    drunk off of me,]"

    ♥
    ♥
    ♥
    ♥
    ♥
    ♥


    • CarCrashHumor
      February 16, 2007
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      yeah i know... lol, can't write lately.

      thanks for reading anyways though.

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