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Skeleton

The Skeleton

Lifeless body, Empty and clear.
Placed into the ground, once whole and pale, now white as snow  without a care.
Her life was  worth pennies, but was locked in a jar, with little air .never going far.
IT was wants all so simple living dieing,
But feeling . . .When was that part of the Deal?
Lifeless now ,in the grave, cold against the world stage,
Empty and clear, No one Loved this Women My Dear.


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  • shatteredFaith
    June 1, 2007
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    i understand u but thats not always a good thing..great write..i love ur style


  • Honestly Amazing
    February 20, 2007

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    Becca, I read his poem. I didn't see why he wouldn't want me to read it....it wasn't THAT big of a deal.


  • LaVieBohemme
    February 18, 2007
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    WOW!!!

    great rite... pretty sad tho...


  • wish you loved me
    February 18, 2007
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    sad...

    great rite though!

  • Honestly Amazing
    February 16, 2007
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    .....that's so sad!

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