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A Feather

Walking through a land of bold greens
Dull browns
I come across a feather
Tiny
Almost nonexistent
Bordered by crystals
Of sun baked sand
I stared
I pondered
What bird may have left it there?
I gaze at the stunning blue sky
The lush treetops
No such bird flew by

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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    February 16, 2007

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    Welcome to allpoetry

    Nice flow and. Nice imagery I like the first line in particular. Thanks for sharing.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy