She looks at you
with other-worldly eyes
She sees far more than she really should
Her body is as pristine as clear sky
and she is enhanced beyond mortal senses
The technology flowing in her veins
heightens every sensation, sight, smell, and sound,
and with her elven background, she is a beauty beyond measure
and a weapon more deadly than a sharp blade.
Author notes
The lines in her skin inspired me to think what would an elf be like with technology running in her veins
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired by sweetpearl.
425 points, ended March 5, 2007, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Heh, I liked this
you kept it fairly simple and that's a relief for me (seems lately everyone's trying to be complicated and sound smart 
not that you don't sound smart or anything but yeah... I'll shut up now)
"Her body is as pristine as clear sky
and she is enhanced beyond mortal senses"
--I love your idea here.
"and with her elven background, she is a beauty beyond measure
and a weapon more deadly than a sharp blade"
--great way to end it. I like how you got inspired by this, that's an great concept. Thanks for your entry.
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