I'm sitting here alone wondering what did i do wrong?
I never seem to please you or even make you proud.
It's because of you im dying, dying to be thin.
It's a never ending battle of which i will not win.
Your silly jokes and little digs would cruch me to the core,
But i would smile and laugh it off because im daddy's little girl.
And I never had the courage to change the way i looked but...
I'm growing up now and i need to look my best.
Don't want to disappoint you and make you feel ashamed,
Wish you could see the pain im in from years of torment and abuse.
Why did you keep on hurting me? What was your excuse?
For every bruise you gave me i would say it was my fault,
But daddy now you've broken me, and never will i mend.
But what's so sad is that i see no wrong in you and
Forever more i'll always be your special little girl.
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You confused me; you really need to go back and revise this. Remember, these are just mere suggestions and not meant to take offense.
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That's terrible. I know what you mean. That's a very raw write. It must be hard for you to write it. Nice job.
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a very sad poem , i have been there and understand i too was verbal abused by my parents
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