The mystical birth of a magical creature
The untold ages that they have seen
Their wingspan impressive
Their tears healing
Their loyalty knows no bounds
Even though they die in fire
They come back better from the ashes
Of their magical rebirth of fire
The Phoenix!
Author notes
I thought that phoenix would be the most magical creatures to write about
A contest entry
- Fantasy Contest! by Catauthor.
600 points, ended February 28, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Lovely imagery here, thank you so much, again, for entering this in my contest and allowing me to read it. Beautiful, thanks for sharing it!
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This is wonderful, I love phoenix poems, and this is short, simple and wonderful!
Very nicely written, And I love your choice of the title. The reader figures it out, but it also encourages the reader to click and read.
Keep on writing, and good luck in the contest.
Nooni
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I love the phoenix, and your description is great. Thanks for this great entry in the contest; good luck!
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Very good description of the phoenix! Nicely done; thanks for entering!
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