Nighty night, dreamscape,
You are my escape,
To purple elephant skies,
And orange silk stars,
Dancing light across the heaven fars.
Nighty night, slumbers,
Away fade the mumblers,
Awaken to magic places,
And palace holding hidden door,
Singing songs about the ones before.
Nighty night, sandman,
Soaring high, I can,
Observe the other people,
And see the shining green sea,
Reflect the blue seas in me.
Nighty night, realworld,
My fantasies in twirled,
Around the pink mountain tops,
And fancy clouds of lullabies,
There's no such things as lies.
Author notes
"Hate and lies"
A contest entry
- One Hundred Poems by Lady-Pegasus.
700 points, ended April 10, 2007, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - O.o Anything Goes o.O by vampireblood.
430 points, ended May 26, 2007, 76 entries
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I loved this phantasmagorical piece. It was really colorful, and seemed liked you were using the crayola box as a means of dealing with dark and depressing things and lightening them up by saying 'Nighty night'.
Wonderful poem!
David
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I liked this piece, it was interesting and unique. I loved these lines the most:
Nighty night, dreamscape,
You are my escape,
To purple elephant skies,
And orange silk stars,
Dancing light across the heaven fars.
It was just so unique, and didn't make much sense...but I still like it haha.
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Thank you for your contest submission, I do need to ask you review the rules and edit your submission appropriately. Please IM me and let me know this has been done, thank you.
This is a touching little write, full of imagery. A few lines are a bit bumpy, but easily smoothed if you so choose. Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors.
Hetohke'e * 
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Thank you for the requested edit, submission has been noted.
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