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You Asked Me Why

You asked me why I love you
I'm glad I don't know why
It's just a special feeling
That warms me deep inside

You asked me why I like you
I never thought what for
It's just everything you do
Makes me want you more

You asked me why I want you
Your the girl that I adore
If I only had you
I'd need to dream no more

You asked if I'd be happy
Loving only you
Darling I think you can see
Already that I do

So come into my arms tonight
It's a journey made for two
I'll take you on a magic flight
To a place called me and you

Author notes

To my ap wife'may we inspire each other.And this was a prewrite

A contest entry

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  • XxForeverFaithfulxX
    June 16

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    It was beautiful and sweet. Wonderful write. Keep it up. Good luck and thank you for entering my contest.

    ~Kayla


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 18

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    wow, this is a lovely poem for your love,very well put..
    thank you for this entry into my contest
    mm


  • Blue Rew silver member
    August 25, 2008

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    An honest tribute to love when it is "just right".
    No explainations are needed, nor are they found.
    Your sing-song flow of rhyme helps keep this
    verse gentle comparing well to the words expressed.
    Blue


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    Your words had a beautiful honesty to them and I appreciated the way you expressed your feelings.

    Thank you for entering and best wishes in the judging.

    Love Margaret


  • fallinxalone
    May 24, 2008
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    aw.this was really nice.thank you for entering it.


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    December 27, 2007

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    hank you for your second entry in our contest

    We look forward to you entering any of our further contests

    All the best...Sue and Jeff


  • BluRosePoet8488
    August 29, 2007

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    It's an impressive poem, but it just doesn't paint a portrait for me. I do like this poem though. There is lots of emotion and lovely thoughts. Keep the ink flowing and good luck. Thanks for sharing.
    ~Donna~


  • Sinfully Yours
    August 23, 2007
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    Impressive! What love, as my favorite topic in poetry. Very romantic! Good luck!
    Miss Marie


  • Lucky-Charm
    August 18, 2007
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    Very lovely! Seems your a romantic one.Romance makes the world evolve.Beautifully written!

    • bluecollarlove
      August 18, 2007
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      Geeze

      Looking at your picture makes me want to feel looking into your eyes.To hold your hands,To try and resist for as long as I can so not to ruin the incredible feeling of wanting.If you could only feel me lookiing at you.We would fly away to places we've never been.


  • galfalfa gold member
    August 17, 2007
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    That last stanza is swooning material..how romantic

    loved this!

    Bravo,

    galfalfa


  • Celticjedi
    August 15, 2007
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    Absolutely beautiful! And I know that feeling quite well...when you love someone for who they are, no matter who they are. My favorite lines, that define how clever and unique you are:

    "I'll take you on a magic flight
    To a place called me and you"

    Great job! Thanks for entering, keep writing!
    Luvs,
    Cj


  • duana
    August 5, 2007
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    hi wow this reads like a song fromn the seventies. Nice job.


  • Sweetangelgrace
    February 21, 2007

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    hey, I thought that this poem was awesome i think that you should write poems like this more often
    This poem took the words right out of my mouth. or more so, right from my heart.
    This poem says everything a person in love could say.

    I am speechless, moved and touched. Keep it up and good luck!

    ~~GRACE~~


  • Kristin Melissa
    February 16, 2007
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    Awwwwwwwwwww!

    That is so so so so sweet... I wrote a letter to my boyfriend one time that said almost the same thing!! I'm not sure if he actually believed it or not but... It was true! Great Job!!! Beautiful work!!


  • wings of an angel
    February 15, 2007

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    This is a lovely poem you penned here, your rhythm and rhyme flowed beautifully throughout the entire poem good luck in my contest

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