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True To Self

 




Immorality

      plagues society;

 

Humanity struggles

      to keep

 head above water

               in the abyss

 of prejudice.

 

Hell bent

    on materialism;

 

truth

      &

        justice

              lay tainted

and compassion

    is lost

          in a world

     of self indulgence.


 

Single spirit walks

                  in confidence

  as internal scales

       of integrity

           remains balanced ~

                                         true to self.



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  • marrow
    February 15, 2007

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    woot, i applaud you.

    and, and, and.... i..... 

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    SUMMON SNEASEL!

     

     

     


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    February 15, 2007

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    Excellent writing, sweetie!
    Many truths spoken within each line of your write! I wish you all the best in all you set out to do!
    Love ya,
    Sandy


  • just rob gold member
    February 15, 2007
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    Good stuff!

    A Big Right On! for the theme, and it reads like flowing waters, deep.
    Really a good read.


  • Blazing White Wolf
    February 15, 2007

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    this is lovely and so truthful for society has lost all the touch that makes us truly beautiful commpassion and that sense of connectedness not only to each other but everything that exists well done

    love,
    Master


  • MuddyKing
    February 15, 2007
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    I love the truth and brevity with this
    excellent

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