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friEND

To the friend that broke my heart,
The one that tore and ripped it all apart.

Here’s to you my glorious friend,
The one that brought me, to the end.

Did you not know what you were doing?
Did you not know my heart you were subduing?

Now I lay in ashes,
While my life before me flashes.

Here’s to you,
My friend who withdrew.

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  • Bloody tears15
    March 20, 2007
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    thats a good poem!!!!


  • The Life Led
    February 15, 2007
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    As they say, "friends are your worst enemy"...or something along those lines great poem, but dont be upset over your.."friend" let it go and move on. That way you can make better friends

    Ty


  • Princessdove
    February 15, 2007

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    I can feel the anger that you have towards this other friend. I think its kind of vengeful to blame someone though, just my opinion.