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These moments...

It's the feeling in my stomach when you tickle me so hard,
people outside can here me (lol)

It's my fingers slowly moving through your hair as we lay in my bed
And the kisses that so passionately push against each other in the dark

It's the clumsy moments that make us laugh and flinch at the same time
and the text messages that never seem to end (so your fault)

It's that one moment that you leaned over to kiss me in the movie theater
and I smiled mid-kiss so contently, I almost forgot where we were

It's these moments... these wonderful moments...



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  • Regenhart
    February 15, 2007
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    love it

  • PalmettoSky
    February 15, 2007
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    This is a beautiful work of poetry. The rythm and scheme is very inviting and lovely.
    Flows so well, and sends a distinct message.Most creative and thought provoking.... Another beautiful piece my friend! Be blessed and thanks for sharing your incredible talent!


    • Tonights Angel
      February 16, 2007
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      Thanks so much for your comment, this was sort of a spur of the moment piece, I'm glad you liked it