I’m not a negative person
I really try not to be
But every time it rains
It only rains on me
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good one dear...what an interesting short to the point message...with so much heart and sincerity along with innocence...a perfect couplet i'd say
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*sigh*
I know this feeling very well! I've been told quite often that I have this "black cloud" that follows me everywhere I go. Ugggh! Very short, bitter sweet and to the point.
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Excellent!!Oh how I totally understand this piece..But don't feel so bad, I have the same problem as you. Great write and an awesome thought for a great poem.
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This was sooo adorable..is that the right word to describe it..yeah I think so..almost feel sorry for the guy, but had to kinda chuckle too...what a remarkable job befitting of the picture...Once again, thats all I am going to say~~~Kindred spiritof mine~~~
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Cool
lol I really like this piee. It's funny and the picture adds so much to it.
nice job
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omg, you got my raincloud.....ok, I am ready to barter.....those o's for my raincloud...I write so much better when its raining.
Great poem, gf.
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