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Leaflet

 acorns 

 

One hundred ten from acorn cup
my trunk, once slender, up and up
advanced to tickle sun and moon.
I versify. Life's afternoon
slips into eventide to sup
beside the golden buttercup,
among the joyous saplings strewn,
no longer hidden, bounty, boon.

From sunrise smile with dewdrop pearls

whose tears deck leaves as each uncurls,

from breath by photosynthesis

to death without a goodbye kiss,

from sapling which warm zephyr twirls

to gnarled old wood with outgrowth burls,

on how I live, on that and this,

my roots reflect before abyss

recycling swallows branch and twig.

I realize life's whirligig

spins rings concentric marking time

to final season's reasoned climb,

from shoot to trunk and branches big

where grunting pigs for truffles dig,

plays panorama pantomime

from small to tall productive prime.  


Although deep rooted, tree to tree
transmits, receives, all share lore we
from long lost Ents once learned before
our quintessential none ignore
fixed time and place as by decree
we walked no longer.  By degree
our waiting, shepherd like, restore
to earth a balance more and more
contested by Man's needless squander
from here unto the wild blue yonder.
None urban grey smog clogs dismiss
as harmless. Men must reminisce :

as chickens home to roost will wander
humanity - no time to ponder -
clima[c]tic tipping point does miss,

goodbye to joy, goodbye to bliss.

One hundred years and ten I oak
through summer sun and winter cloak
bore witness to the seasons' change,
to human intercourse, exchange,
from hoarfrost leaflessness to soak
when purple, yellow, crocus poke
amid dawn's dew while worming range
both early bird and shadows strange.

'Mid shadows numberless' my shade
spreads out amid the gladding glade,
where hollyhock and lupin rise
to draw light's glory from the skies.
May life for men spread unafraid
and unpolluted, story laid
to greet with open-eyed surprise
life's weather in whatever guise.

One hundred years and ten I tree
extend my branching canopy,
while underground in silence spread
stretched roots beneath man's heedless tread.
Pride grew within, while babe one knew
to stripling, then to cemetry,
leafed out a destiny, which, read,
showed little purpose, tail or head.

Man's generations come and go,
ignoring seasons' reasoned flow,
would all control to leave a mark
or heartless heart on rugged bark.
But patient bark will overflow
this rapid race whose trace may know
no glory when their story stark
is told by ants in days now dark.

One hundred years and ten. I see
woodpeckers knock, - fragility
despite umbrella overhead,
beside the shallow riverbed.
There beech and birch accompany
pine saplings b[l]eached by destiny.
There willow waves her streaming head,
there thoughts foregather, nothing dread.

Man's generation climate change
prepares - for tree 'tis passing strange
to sense through signals in the air
ice melting round the polar bear.
This threatens tree : new insects range
from south to north, thus rearrange
established patterns everywhere, -
some species sink, jinx can't repair.

One hundred years and ten, few things
today seem stable, stay Time's stings,
like Cupid's dart, swift disarrange
the plans of mice and men, while mange
rots fur once fine, wine tart turns, strings
of cause, effect, converge, which brings
cusp watershed - yet still life streams
bark, branches, raft, recrafting dreams.

Here see the brambles' carefree play,
here too wild roses mild display
their petal banners white and pink
recorded now in online ink.
Here too find peace and balmy breeze
which laughs at man's fatuities,
while honey bees buzz through and link
Nature's cycles while we think.

One hundred years and ten my rings
record life's word, clima[c]tic swings
from summers Indian and drought
to winters harsh and frozen out.
Yet "permanence" like many things,
is only relative - Time's wings
ambitions and conventions flout,
wage war on s[t]age, deception, doubt.

Tree tale is drawing to its end
with naught to strive for, naught defend,
as neutral witness I record
what winds have borne of bed and board.
Leaf blows from branch, Time's wind may lend
one hundred years of bough and bend
until the final bow cuts cord,
leaves die a log by sunlit sward...

Author notes

robi3_1615_robi3_0000 XXX_DNZ
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'Mid shadows numberless' - John Keats - Ode to a Nightingale

pic 1 acorns http://flickr.com/photos/silvia31163/213161941/
pic 2 Andrew Luyten
http://flickr.com/photos/aluytenuk/2553676110/

inter stanza pics http://flickr.com/photos/grjenkin/1387748699/

Forest pic http://photo.accuweather.com/photogallery/content/varioussizes.aspx?pid=60276&partner=26745

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  • MJ Forgives
    November 3
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    Wow really great poem. I got into this poem. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for entering. Love and Peace!
    -Jess

  • onlyforyou
    October 16
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    very nice. well written. good luck in my contest


  • Jonathan ROBIN
    October 16
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    Contest onlyfor you
    prompt
    Picture one
    http://alejka.deviantart.com/art/dying-139827330


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    October 13

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    Ah loved the pictures. The poem was really well written as well. Thank you for taking the time to enter. Excellent work on this and best of luck to you in my contest.



    -Steve-


  • Hija of the King
    September 4

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    congrats on your trophies. thank you for entering my contest. a wonderful poem accented by the background and text formating and pics. God bless.


  • Pisces Pieces
    August 21

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    Indeed a beautiful poem and a wonderful story. The imagery is fantastic and the technical aspects are flawless. I loved the rhythm and rhyme!


  • Dryad Enya
    August 19

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    This is a sensation to read, your exploration of the lnaguage has enabled you to create a rich casket of wonders, if I may say however that the...continus flow of pictures throughout the peice does upset the reading flow ever so slightly at it becomes a wee bit of putting.

    This is a very dazzling poem, keep writting and best of luck
    Gorecki


  • Tinselpool
    August 9

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    This was amazing. I'm adding to my page like it or not.

    My favorite part:

    [From sunrise smile with dewdrop pearls

    whose tears deck leaves as each uncurls,

    from breath by photosynthesis

    to death without a goodbye kiss,

    from sapling which warm zephyr twirls

    to gnarled old wood with outgrowth burls,

    on how I live, on that and this,

    my roots reflect before abyss

    recycling swallows branch and twig.

    I realize life's whirligig

    spins rings concentric marking time

    to final season's reasoned climb,

    from shoot to trunk and branches big

    where grunting pigs for truffles dig,

    plays panorama pantomime

    from small to tall productive prime. ]

    I also really liked the first stanza.

    Never stop.

    Claire.


  • HazelEyedGirl
    August 2
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    good

    i liked it

    good luck


  • Kathraina silver member
    July 29

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    Very interesting write!
    I love the concept here. Flawless rhyme and flow.
    All the pictures throughout the piece are a little distracting though. And while every stanza is amazing in its own right, it just feels like there is too much said here.
    Other than that, amazing write!
    Bravo

  • Its got a line from my favourite poem in :-) its also a beautiful, sensitive and dense poem filled with more imagery than you can shake a twig at. A really admirable poem capturing the changing cycle of not just one tree but the very idea of a tree and all trees in history. Well written.


  • Umi Juvariel
    April 9

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    Interesting pictures that accompany this piece. Well written and well versed, and very calming. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.

  • Extremely long, but an interesting write, it was great the way you described eveything, great imagery and flow


  • Fulabeans
    March 27

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    Holy Pancakes!

    Yes!

    Suxch a beautiful poem!. long as heck but it is sooo good.

    thanks for entering,
    -Dusty-


  • drakostheron
    February 12
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    This is a very beautiful write but what option is this supposed to be following?


  • Luciferschild
    January 9

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    a bit long but the rhyme scheme managed to keep me at a bit of attention thank you for enterd good lucx

  • U.g.l.y.
    December 21, 2008

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    I hope you didn't take one hundred years and ten for writing this poem. It's good, but I'm not a fan of rhyme. I love the way you depicted the life of a tree through all the processes earth is passing through. Thanks for entering my contest.


  • dragonscales
    November 21, 2008

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    great

    its so beautiful i could just cry *sniff* that poem really spoke to me not to mention that the length of the poetry is extreme you are a real artist have you thought about publishing anything that you wrote i bet you could make a book out of this stuff keep up the good work. K?

  • ea silver member
    September 10, 2008
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  • Mrs. Serial Killa
    September 8, 2008

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    MMM kind of repetive but what poem isnt! it was very nice and had a great flow! thank you for entering my contest and good luck!


  • Lily of the Valley
    September 7, 2008
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    Where, oh where would mankind be
    without each great or humble tree
    to filter air and keep it sweet
    and brighten up a dull grey street
    with swirls of colour blowing free
    or balance mans destructive spree
    as rain that falls sheet by sheet
    is drunk by roots until replete.

    ... without the trees mankind is without much hope!


  • written-in-ink
    September 7, 2008

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    very nice concept

    i love how you molded it
    its very amazing
    and written very well

    thank you so much for entering and good luck


  • unavailable
    September 5, 2008

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    you wear me out, you've so much to say.
    Woe is me!

    Very good, though I went crossed eyed a few times.


  • MelodiousDreaming
    August 26, 2008
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    Your ability, your talent, it just amazes me. I'm positively green with envy ^_^


  • City-of-Angels
    August 16, 2008

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    Wow I loved how this all centered around the tree Very unique write. Great rhyming also, didn't sound forced at all. Even though this is a great write, and does fit the quote, I still don't think I'll allow pre-writes just because then the prewrites will just come flooding in and a lot of them will hardly fit the options. Haha I'm sure you know what I mean. I apoligize but thanks for the awesome read I'll have to read up on somemore of your poetry!

  • piccola silver member
    August 8, 2008

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    This was very soothing. I'm listening to soft music right now ... the combination is really great. Very nice entry thank you.


  • lindaburns gold member
    July 26, 2008

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    Judge:
    When I reviewed this November 23, 2007, I said,
    • “I like the poem over all but I don’t understand the why of “clima[c]tic” or “s[t]age”. Please be so good as to tell me the significance. LATER: OK. Thanks. Very Good.” It seems like you messaged me about it. It’s a good poem and I wish you luck in this contest.


    • Jonathan ROBIN
      July 26, 2008
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      Words in [b]rackets

      Words in [b]rackets vehicle two or more ways a particular word or phrase may be interpreted

      clima[c]tic” both climatic and climactic
      “s[t]age sage stage and age
      b[l]eached both beached and bleached


      Hoping this answers the question


  • Blue Rew silver member
    July 24, 2008

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    This is a finely written piece...
    combining the feel and presence of some
    classic literature I seem to recall.
    Intricate ageing told through personification...
    a journal of nature as I would see it.
    "as neutral witness I record" really seems to
    summarize what I felt at the end. This write
    is so detailed, but does not offer emotion or
    any dimension to strengthen the narrative.
    Being that these trees are actually divine
    spirits to the Druids, I can not overlook that
    which seems to leave the telling detached. Blue


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    110

    when iio pops up I think years! of original nature, I loved this poem as the acorns adorn oak trees in all their glory,
    nice piece here, thank you for the link to this poem, it was a delight to reaLin


  • reeseXtheXsoldier
    July 2, 2008
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    I really like this

    this is so cool! You rock! Thanks for entry!


  • Misery into Melody
    May 10, 2008
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    OMG I LOOOOVE this.


  • BlackSwan
    April 30, 2008

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    well that certainly took awhile to read, but it was well worth it. what talent you have with rhyming!

    -thank you for your entry


  • Cat10
    April 20, 2008

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    thanks for entering, a very nice write, and LONG! good job and good luck in this and in all of your other contests!


  • Kp.s
    April 19, 2008

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    My goodness this was long, but very good! I loved your rhyming scheme, I usually am not a fan of rhyming but it really fit in this case. This was like a tree's life story-so beautiful and effortless! I loved it, a perfect entry, and exactly what I was looking for. I have too many favourite lines to mention them all, but I especially liked this:

    Man's generations come and go,
    ignoring seasons' reasoned flow,
    would all control to leave a mark
    or heartless heart on rugged bark.

    This is so true, we often neglect trees' fragile and wonderful existence. Thank you for entering and best of luck,
    KP

  • Shrouded in Mystery
    April 16, 2008

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    This is an interesting poem. Thank you for sharing, well done for this brilliant poem, good luck and thank you for entering.


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    April 15, 2008

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    This was a very intreaging write and takes a lot of reading to appreciate it.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.


  • adios muchachos gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    Jon

    And the ants shall tell the story! And so they shall!
    You know whenever you are within e-shot to me I get the craving for dover sole. What's that all about?LOL
    Did you ever have Lupe de mer?(I think that is it)

    Well, this was as good as it gets. I've been living in the desert here in Las Vegas for so long, it took me a good ten minutes to remember what kind of tree acorns grow into!LOL

    I loved this.
    I did find one pair of rhymes slightly forced! But you have the rest of your life to figure out just which pair they were!LOL Kidding! I like to kid.LOL

    Be good.

    John




  • ReachingForStars
    April 9, 2008

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    For a LOTR nerd like me, this was great! I love the Ent reference


  • NeonRose
    April 9, 2008

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    This poem is crafted from fine wood, and polished with a loving hand. The length of it alone is impressive, and the content superb. Well done, poet.


  • tealover1991
    April 9, 2008

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    Extraordinary!!

    I sincerely enjoyed reading this poem. I never read anything quite like this one. It's beautiful. You must be a hippy...I'm a hippy myself. Your write is awesome.


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    April 9, 2008
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    Excellent

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Lord_of_the_Rings

    A most excellent write indeed. since you mentioned 'Ents', I immediately thought of Tolkien's "Lord of the Rings Trilogy", to which I have provided a computer link for those who may not be familiar with the word 'Ents'.
    Thank you for sharing this marvelous write.

  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    April 9, 2008

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    Superb

    Most excellent indeed. I loved your reference to Tolkien
    and may provide a computer link for those not familiar with 'Ents". Thank you a most charming write.


  • frownsnfreckles
    April 9, 2008

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    I went for a walk in a beach wood the other day and thought of a massacre, the bark was falling away and you could see the holes of scavenging beetles or some insect eating away from the inside. Outwardly great limbs had been broken off rather than cut and some had been reduced to stumpy, shapeless deformities. Last year I took a camera and photographed a lot of these same trees, I'm glad now that I did.
    Loved the poem and enjoyed the rhyming couplets, not usually one for such structured verse I found this well suited to the content and engrossing.


  • forgotten Emo
    April 9, 2008

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    fantastic!!!

    Readind it was like when I was youger again and I would listen to the trees speak to me when I would walk by. I know that sound weird but they do. their voice is dying though and It kills me to see what we - manknind - so carelessly have very nearly brought to an end. Thanks for your words that remind me of a time that is quickly fading.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    Awesome poet
    Reading each line I absorb your beautiful words
    The Oak speaks and we must listen, or else we will have only pictures in a frame to remember them by
    Julie


  • sassylilpoet silver member
    November 28, 2007

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    Very nice from the title to the very last word.
    Published yet?

    good luck and God Bless,
    Sassy

  • lindaburns gold member
    November 23, 2007
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    I like the poem over all but I don’t understand the why of “clima[c]tic” or “s[t]age”. Please be so good as to tell me the significance. LATER: OK. Thanks. Very Good.


  • Providence
    August 29, 2007

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    Ah to lie in the cool shade and refresh myself with the sweet flowing waters of the words. Excellent write my dear. Made me want to head outside!

    Marianne

  • misticmoonlite gold member
    August 23, 2007
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    oh wow I loved this ,you did this piece with nice flow through out,reminds me of the old formed poetry, loved it,thank you for entering, good luck...SH

  • Mercury Rising
    July 17, 2007
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    My goodness, you sure put tremendous thought and careful consideration into this very deep and extremely well-crafted poem. Your rhyme scheme is brilliant, your meter impeccable, and the whole poem is really amazing. The title is also very clever, and suggests that even this poem, for all its depth and breadth and length, is still but a leaflet in relation to the whole immensity of the oak. Just a delight to read and reflect upon.
    Best of luck in our contest, and thanks for entering this outstanding poem.

    David


  • kamranAslam
    June 28, 2007

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    hey thats wonderful and interesting one.Bravo!!!!!!
    Keep it up.Thats too lengthy and its structure is good enough.wel done!!!!!!!!!


  • Melodies
    February 15, 2007

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    BRAVO!!

    The sweet wonder of this masterful write sweeps over me and I mentally shake your hand and shyly ask for your autograph. You have written a masterpiece poem on the subject of trees! This wonderful poem should be included in students' English literature text books, and in science books, too! I do admire your talent and fine, sensitive mind!


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    February 15, 2007

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    Such depth and deep tree-talk, friend pen. Whiel my mind says we are in trouble, my soul knows Creator would rid us of his creation before he would end earth. We were created last and least desired. Before us came air, and light and waters and fishes of the sea.....

    Yu cudl publish this anywhere, in fact, you MUST publish this now, so we, the supposed guardians of his creation, can read and know, before they go, we go.


  • cherche -d -ame
    February 15, 2007
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    always love anything to do with a treeQuestion re author note: Is it an "Ode to the Nightingale"? I do know of such a poem , but right off hand do not recall author....but it alludes to him seeing his mortality in a nightingale that he observed in a tree.....
    tt
    reenie


  • waydownuponjoy
    February 15, 2007
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    A joy to read ...

    What a great rendition of what a tree senses and how ably you share it in eloquence! Very nice and surely worth more than one read to really appreciate the talent gone into this poem! Nice sharing, from one who loves all of nature ... joy

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