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Voices in My Head

They say I am alone,
there is no one here,
no one to hear if I scream,
no one here to plead with,
if that is true,
then who are these voices in my head?

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  • Lady-Pegasus
    June 2, 2007
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    HEHE now that you ahve revealed the question, the answer may be varied, for me there are many voices, my mother is a strong one and hard to ignore even when I should be, lmao my muse is most often there as well, not to mentin my inner child and my ego Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e
  • azlyn gold member
    February 17, 2007

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    A timeless question you ask here. Who are those voices? We may wonder form time to time, but without them we would be lost. A very wonderful poem you have penned. The words a few, but the soul is magnificent!
    Best of luck to you!
    Blessed Be!
    Azlyn


    • Amythest Moonjade gold member
      February 18, 2007
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      Merry meet azlyn,

      Thank you for your applause and your wonderful compliments. It is true that some of the best conversations I have ever had were with the voices in my head. Thanks again.

      Amythest

  • crystallynnbradford
    February 16, 2007

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    Interesting...

    I really enjoyed reading this poem a lot. I like the theme of it and it's kinda spooky. it's a very clever and creative write. Best luck in the contest


    • Amythest Moonjade gold member
      February 16, 2007
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      Merry meet Crystal,

      Thank you for your enthusiatic applause and wishes for luck. As of this writting, it is still undecided. I have a lot of stiff competition. Thanks again dear.


      Amythest

  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    February 15, 2007

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    Spooky ~ such a creative and clever little write. Thanks for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.

  • zochit2me gold member
    February 15, 2007
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    I hear those voices too all of the time. i think they are poem voices from past ghost talking to me. Sometimes i wake up in the night and they are talking to me...lol. Now that's freaky. great penning here and good luck in this contest.
    Becky


    • Amythest Moonjade gold member
      February 16, 2007
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      Merry meet zochit,

      Thank you for your applause and wishes for good luck. I have some really stiff competion in this contest. Thanks again.

      Amythest

  • xXShayde666Xx
    February 15, 2007
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    wow

    all i can say is that you have written a marvelous poem. It's short, and simple, yet it really lets people know what the whole piece is about. Great job!


    • Amythest Moonjade gold member
      February 16, 2007
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      Merry meet Princess,

      Thank you for your enthusiastic applause. I think that this is one of the shortest pieces I have ever written. If you check the contest, you can see the pic that this was written for. Somehow, it just seems appropiate to me.
      Thanks again for your applause and for your wonderful comments.

      Amythest

  • dream5111
    February 15, 2007

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    "They say I am alone" is my favorite part i really like this poem because I can really relate to it great write

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