one lone goldfish cracker sat on a table
while he watched the rest of his family get mangled
fins and tails and pleading young eyes
he watched as the pieces went flying on by
this Godzilla like creature let out a roar
and finding his kids tasty, he had a few more
the lone goldfish couldn't help but cry
why did his wife and kids have to die?
as the beast devoured his family at leisure
he watched as Young Timmy shook from a seizure
Little Timmy's Head screamed out in pain
as the demonic creature gnawed out his brains
and then a loud voice was heard overhead
"JAKE, WHY ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR BED!
WE'VE ALREADY BEEN THROUGH THIS SAME THING BEFORE
PUT THE BAG AWAY YOU CAN'T HAVE ANYMORE!"
and then the lone goldfish cried out in fear
as the minion of Satan flashed him a leer
closer and closer the sharpened teeth drew
and inside his mouth, it started to chew
he begged for mercy and cried out in pain
pieces of his body fell out like rain
a final scream of desperation, and the fishy is dead
as little Jake sleepily goes back to bed
A contest entry
- ~~CANDY ANIMALS~~ by Melodies.
450 points, ended February 16, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you are ONE SICK PUPPY!! I'll never eat animal crackers again!
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thx
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I laughed and sort of moaned...
because this is so DARNED FUNNY
and yet... I sort of felt sorry for the poor 'lil cracker! 
You did a wonderful job writing this darling poem! 
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your final memories would be awesome though <.<
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I really have to agree with alexscherios, aka my brother, that if I die and come back to life as well... you too leave me that way.. also nice use of syllables.
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Is your talent... bringing things to life? I hope if I die and come back to life as something inanimate... you leave me that way.
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