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Last Breath

I had no idea that you were chosen,
and when’s the last time that we’ve spoken.

And you

just keep spinning;

while everyone around you,

everyone around you,

just keeps grinning.

Because I would give my last breath to save you,
but it wouldn’t matter anyway.
Because if everyone around you
kept on spinning…
Would you turn to me and say?

I’m sorry

Because I would give my last breath to save you,
but it wouldn’t matter anyway.
Because if everyone around you
just kept grinning…
Would you to turn to me and say?

I’m sorry

Because I would give my last breath to save you,
but it wouldn’t matter anyway.
Because if everyone around
you kept grinning…
Would to turn to me and say?

A contest entry

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  • Angel With No Halo
    February 16, 2007
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  • Angel With No Halo
    February 15, 2007

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    This was very well done hon. Lyrics?? Very moving. I am certain I would sit and listen!! Great job.. thank you for entering. Good luck!!

    ~Krys~